Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

Great updates - how I regret missing a whole instalment!

I'm with Thoul - B, a sincere apology would be the best course of action. After all, Saya's the one who has to clear up after them. Come to think of it, the apology might be more meaningful if they offered to help out while explaining recent developments. Many hands make light work, right?

"Oh god! I'm so sorry Saya," Nikki said almost immediately. Saya smiled and looked at Sinah, "Do you have anything to say for yourself?" Sinah just kind of gulped as he said it, "Any touch a good touch right?" Vince burst out laughing. But Saya didn't, nor did anyone else. Finally, Saya just walked over. Sinah tensed as she never once, stopped to gaze away from him.

She lowered her head and whispered a few selective words. When she was finished she walked away, back into the kitchen. Sinah merely went and sat down, wide-eyed and pale.

"What a great way to tell everyone huh?" Ben whispered to Vince.

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What should Ben/Vince do now?

A - Ben and Vince should speak up now
B - Make sure Sinah is alright
C - Tell a joke
D - Leave and go continue the investigation on their own
E - Author's mind

Sorry it was kinda short this time around, I think I has the dreaded writers again. but now onto some other notes.

For all those who are wondering, Kyoda is now out for all to read. It can be found in the forum games section of the site. I am accepting all characters and will implement them into the story whenever I get a chance. Even if you don't want to create a character, why not create a country or some sort of technology maybe? Afterall, it will be mostly you, the readers of Kyoda who make the story, world, and characters.

So please, help me out there.

Interesting! I vote "B" - they should check whether Sinah is all right, thereby allowing some of the tension to dissipate before they recount their story.

Yeah, B. That will give everyone a moment to cool down before bringing up the Chaz problem. It can't wait too long because Shorty might be in danger, but cool heads are needed in such a situation.

"Yeah," Vince said as he shrugged. He walked towards Sinah, "Yo Sinah. You doing alright?" Sinah looked at Vincent, "When did you get back?" Sinah replied, his voice a bit shaky. "Just now. So, what did she tell you?"

Sinah shook his head, "You don't want to know. It's worse than that one time when Harvey was attacked by a crawler. You remember what happened right?" Vince himself went a little white, "Yeah, I remember."

"So, did you guys find Chaz?" Nikki questioned. "Unfortunately not. In fact, there is no sign of him anywhere. To top it off, the grave he was supposed to have visited was dug up." Ben replied in his stern voice.

"So, we investigated a bit and had no real luck. We came back here hoping to get some help."

Gryz stood up, "I don't like it." "I don't either," Rika said, "It's just like that story Chaz told us." Gryz nodded back. "What story?" Nikki questioned.

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I couldn't think of nothing else... sorry..
A - Have Gryz tell the story
B - Have Rika tell the story
C - Have nobody tell the story
D - PLOT TWIST!
E - Author's mind

D- Plot twist!! I love plot twists. Always adds a bit of mystery and suspicion to any story, whether it's a novel or fan-fic.

I was about to vote "E", author's mind, but a plot twist would suit me just fine as well. So consider this a vote for either "D" or "E", whichever option avoids a tiebreak...

I want to hear the story... but I can't decide who would be better at telling it. So I'll go with E.

As far as I see it, D and E were basically going to be the same anyway so... yeah...

Also, as an early Christmas gift to you guys. I have asked another person from another site to create Sinah! I know I never gave you guys a description for him, so here he is, in his current state as well, kind of. ^_^



Full credit goes to DarkOfNight - D for his hard work. ^_^

Now, time to move on to the story!
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"Well, back after Alys died, Chaz began taking less and less missions at the guild," Rika began, "but that was only because he was taking the harder ones. There was one mission though, that seemed to concern Chaz the most." Everyone sat around and listened. "What was the mission?" Sinah asked.

"I'm not too sure on all the details, but I can tell you this. It was the last mission Chaz's mentor ever went on before making Chaz her partner. She wouldn't allow him to know anything about it."

"Did he ever find out what it was about?" Nikki asked. Rika nodded, "I've never seen him that angry in my entire life."

SMASH!

The front window burst as a body came bursting into the room. It was Chaz ho collided into Vincent's body. Everyone jumped up and looked out the window. There stood a beautiful woman, her facial features shadowed by her bangs.

"I... can't believe it." Rika said with her mouth open. "What the hell is going on?" Gryz said as he looked just as dumbfounded. Chaz moaned as he whispered a name, "Alys." Was all he said.

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That enough of a twist for yah?
A - ATTACK!
B - Wait and see what happens
C - Call out "Alys"
D - Try and communicate
E - Auther's Mind

I'm leaning between C and D... I guess D. Calling "Alys" out before finding out if it really is Alys would be a bad idea.

And, nice bit of art!