First of all, woohoo! Floppers get some action!
Second, WHOA. I was wondering why Lune was being so creepily suave towards Thea, but it looks like he has ulterior motives. I can't wait to see how that plays out. I like your characterization of Lune. He's sort of a Jareth, it seems: Partially bad, partially good, and creepy-yet-strangely-charismatic all at the same time.
Meanwhile, I am loving the way Sari's and Ayn's relationship is developing, even if it's merely "hey, we have some things in common" right now. Awww. It's so sweet! I also loved the bit about the monitor and its update. Bwaha! Perfectly done.
I love all the cliffhangers, even though I'm going crazy over the misunderstandings! That's in keeping with the game, though, so kudos on that. Ack! Silly PSIII, if only those stupid sages had friggin' cleared things up for the general populaces of Alisa III and the moons.