Saxophones can be a boon when used masterfully AND in the correct setting but failing short of any of those two criteria immediately turns it into a ridiculous sound straight out of an adult movie soundtrack.
As for you tracks, well Jazz really isn't my area of expertise at all but I'll enjoy listening to it once in a while. Your tracks however do scream of detective movies. For an instant, my world turned black and white and I felt like I was wearing a fedora