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Re: Reviews of The Lost Esper
by Thoul » Sat May 9, '09, 6:56 pm
Somehow, I missed the last two chapters until now. The Rune-Hahn interaction was interesting. I wasn't expecting that take on it, so I'm really curious to see where it is going to lead.
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Re: Reviews of The Lost Esper
by Silver_Surfer1 » Sat May 16, '09, 12:34 am
I had some free time this afternoon and decided to do some reading, so I read all 8 chapters at one time. Bravo - great story and great writing! I think it is a very interesting story. The little girl is very devoted to Rune and I'm glad she has found a friend to help. Looking forward to finding out what happens next. 
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Re: Reviews of The Lost Esper
by Darkil » Sun Feb 7, '10, 4:18 am
So I really hate doing this so please forgive me everyone but I'm curious as to what anyone thinks about the way the story is going so far. If you don't like it, feel free to say. Of course I'm not trying to beg for positive reviews or anything but I'm just curious on everyone's opinion.
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Re: Reviews of The Lost Esper
by Thoul » Thu Mar 4, '10, 2:20 am
It's been a while since I read the story, so I'm behind quite a bit. So far I like where it is going. I'm curious about the identity of the guy in the robe. I can think of several possibilities, so that's interesting. I liked how you worked feeve into the story, too. That was a great way to reflect the real thing in the story.
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Re: Reviews of The Lost Esper
by Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Jan 5, '11, 6:41 pm
Darkil, it's great to see you posting and writing on this wonderful story again! 
Read the newest chapter and enjoyed it, although it was a bit sad. I'm looking forward to seeing what adventures await Alaires up ahead.
Read the newest chapter and enjoyed it, although it was a bit sad. I'm looking forward to seeing what adventures await Alaires up ahead.
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Re: Reviews of The Lost Esper
by Darkil » Thu Jan 6, '11, 1:22 am
Silver_Surfer1 wrote:Darkil, it's great to see you posting and writing on this wonderful story again!
Read the newest chapter and enjoyed it, although it was a bit sad. I'm looking forward to seeing what adventures await Alaires up ahead.
Thank you S_S I have missed my Phantasy Star Phamily very much and I am glad to be here again.
I admit I was a bit more dark with this latest chapter but it will make sense as I move things along. Rest assured Alaires will be playing a much larger role in things to come.
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