Hello,
This topic is for reviews of Moving the Pawns, the fan fiction by Thoul. You may use this topic to let Thoul know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.
Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Moving the Pawns. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.
Thanks,
Thoul