Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

by **Review Type S-2** » Fri Oct 26, '07, 12:03 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Moving the Pawns, the fan fiction by Thoul. You may use this topic to let Thoul know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Thanks,
Thoul

by **Tsunami** » Tue Nov 4, '08, 9:48 am

Okay, I know it's been a really long time since the stories uploaded were reviewable and all, but going back and rereading this was pretty nice. I had first read this some time ago on fanfiction.net actually, but I've always liked this story, even if it is short. ^_^