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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, '10, 5:36 pm 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Her darkest hour by tilinelson2. You may use this topic to let tilinelson2 know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Her darkest hour. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, '10, 6:20 pm 
Wow, you really don't have a problem of putting your characters through some grimy, gritty hell, do you?

Nicely written, although there were a number of Portuguesisms in the story. I'll PM you some of them for future reference.


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