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 Post subject: Reviews of New Beginnings
PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, '07, 1:17 am 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of New Beginnings, the fan fiction by Kaloes. You may use this topic to let Kaloes know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of New Beginnings. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, '10, 10:40 pm 
This is one of the better written pieces I've read of yours, and you get extra brownie points for writing about Adan and Gwyn, who don't get a whole lot of attention in PSIII fanfics. I really would like to know what Adan finds in his adventures on the new planet.


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, '10, 3:53 am 
Interesting story. It seems so familiar, sort of like I've read it before, but is that possible???


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, '11, 3:41 pm 
It is a nice short story. Though the plot is very simple, it is original, as it avoids the common fan theory that Adan will inevitably marry Kara.

Although it is very unlikely that they would crown a woman queen in the paternalistic PSIII society, it is believable for Gwyn because her mother may have worked to restore the apparent equality of her time, when her sister was the leader of their people.


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, '16, 6:35 pm 
Bumping this up!

An interesting story from the perspective of the party going on a new adventure and the Lady he leaves who may wind up being Queen!


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