Hello,
This topic is for reviews of Unexpected Visitor, the fan fiction by Tsunami. You may use this topic to let Tsunami know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.
Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Unexpected Visitor. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.
Thanks,
Thoul