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Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby Review Type S-2 » Thu Sep 2, '10, 10:46 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Silence is Beautiful by black dahlia. You may use this topic to let black dahlia know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby Lucas » Thu Sep 2, '10, 11:29 am

Interesting story, I like how you show that Mieu even though she’s a cyborg can portray strong emotions towards Rhys. It definitely helps bring out the human inside her.

So well done; other than it being a bit fast-paced it was quite a lovely little story. I look forward to more of your work dahlia. ;)
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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby black dahlia » Thu Sep 2, '10, 11:36 am

thanks so much for your review! it really made my day.

as to it being a little fast paced, i will take that on board for the final part as i've still got to write that, but hopefully the ending will be ok and that you'll enjoy it

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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby H-Man » Thu Sep 2, '10, 12:30 pm

Very beautiful story about my favorite PS character. I'd like to see where this will lead to.
*H-Man as Chaz, looks at Rika, aka Paula* Chaz-Man- "Hey, I've been wandering around Motavia for quite a while with you now. It says in that weird blue box up there that one more battle with a sandworm and we can level up to husband and wife!"

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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby black dahlia » Thu Sep 2, '10, 12:44 pm

thank you so much h-man! it's nice to know that someone else has Mieu as their favorite character :D
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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby H-Man » Thu Sep 2, '10, 1:16 pm

Heck, my next fanfic after "The Demon Rods" will deal with Mieu, although it will be in the...*cough*...universe I created in my other PSIII stories. Check them out when you have a few hours to spare. :)
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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Sep 22, '10, 9:06 am

Ah, a simply beautiful story! There is something so romantic about a sweet, stolen kiss. She is definitely showing a human side here. :wink: Hope to read more of this intriguing story. :clap:
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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby augmentedfourth » Sun Dec 26, '10, 4:30 pm

Chiming in way late, as always, but I really liked this story. I like how you emphasized one of the key differences between Mieu and Wren and showed Mieu's emotional side (which is practically non-existant in the game). I can believe her falling for Rhys...I guess we now have a love quadrangle instead of a triangle? ;)
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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Oct 6, '18, 4:06 am

Reading this beautiful story again written by black dahlia! :clap:
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Re: Reviews of Silence is Beautiful

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat May 2, '20, 7:16 pm

Bumping up this excellent story written by black Dahlia! A very interesting read. :clap:
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