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Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Mar 28, '17, 3:29 am

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Re: Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby myau56 » Tue Mar 28, '17, 11:30 am

Very nice and "profound" poem, Rylen : congratulations. The style kis great too and I'm sure that I would never be able to write such things myself.
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Re: Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sun Apr 9, '17, 6:10 pm

Read your poem the other night Rylen, and enjoyed it very much. You have a very good writing style. Would be interesting to read more writing works from you.

The older I get the more I can identify with some of the things you stated in your poem.
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Re: Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Aug 5, '17, 2:34 am

Just read over this poem again today and can't get over how one can identify with the words in the poem as one ages. So true. Great work Rylen!
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Re: Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby Rylen » Sun Aug 6, '17, 2:30 am

Thank you. It was one of those poems that sat in my head for well close to a year. What triggered the idea is that as I've gotten older. The more that I think and act how my father does. Sometimes it's way more subtle. My best writing is stuff that comes out after it has jelled for a while.
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Re: Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Jun 21, '22, 6:25 pm

Had forgotten we had this here until reading it again just now in Rylen's Blog in his latest Lego Project post. A wonderful poem for Father's Day or anytime.
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Re: Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

Postby myau56 » Wed Jun 22, '22, 2:25 pm

A truly wnderful Poem ! Congratulations ! :) :clap:
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