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Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Nov 8, '11, 1:13 am

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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Mon Nov 21, '11, 9:13 pm

Interesting story. Nicely written. It was a little hard to read I admit because of all the enormous suffering she had to endure. Nice ending though.
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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby tilinelson2 » Wed Nov 23, '11, 12:39 am

Thanks for reading, SS1! I didn't want to make it hard to read (unlike the other dark stories I've written), but, well, it is the opinion of the reader that counts.
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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Thu Jun 9, '16, 10:21 pm

Bumping this story review up again. Fascinating story that I enjoyed reading again just now. Yeah, maybe a little dark, but I like some dark stories every now and then. Life is not always about jokes and laughter. Excellent writing tilinelson2! :clap:
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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Jul 30, '22, 5:33 pm

Reading this again. Great story!
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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby myau56 » Sat Aug 6, '22, 12:59 pm

Tilinelson2you are great ! Very nice story and we all hope that you are well and healthy : Maia is waiting for you on this site ! :grouphug:
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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Oct 1, '22, 8:30 pm

Good story!
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Re: Reviews of Paradise Reobtained

Postby myau56 » Sun Oct 2, '22, 11:34 am

A very good story indeed ! :fiery: :clap:
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