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Re: Reviews of Heartbeat, Heartbreak
by Thoul » Sun Mar 27, '11, 11:54 pm
Both chapters are enjoyable, but I have to say I liked the first one more. Probably because of Shir - you always write her as a free, unrestricted spirit. Her unpredictability always adds flair and activity to a story. Amy and Rolf are more sedate by comparison. That's not always a bad thing, but just not what I'm in the mood for from a story right now.
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Re: Reviews of Heartbeat, Heartbreak
by Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Jan 12, '16, 6:59 pm
Almost Valentine's Day 2016 in a few weeks and a good time to read this story again! 
Happy 27th Anniversary Fringes Of Algo ~ Founded April 01, 1997 ~
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