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PostPosted: Tue Nov 18, '14, 11:04 am 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding A Heroine's Burden by Parma Ham. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in A Heroine's Burden. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Parma Ham in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 19, '14, 5:44 pm 
Muahaha! That was an entertaining read. Alis had it pretty rough in the beginning, huh? Thankfully Noah turned out to be worth that long slog through another monster-infested cave.


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, '14, 4:57 am 
I just love that Alis is so frightfully indignant here. That's pretty close to how I really imagine her; she wouldn't put up with any crap. I think this is prime evidence of how Alis would fare in a contest of wills between all the Phantasy Star champions!


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