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Reviews of A Heroine's Burden

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Nov 18, '14, 11:04 am

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Re: Reviews of A Heroine's Burden

Postby Tanith » Wed Nov 19, '14, 5:44 pm

Muahaha! That was an entertaining read. Alis had it pretty rough in the beginning, huh? Thankfully Noah turned out to be worth that long slog through another monster-infested cave.
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Re: Reviews of A Heroine's Burden

Postby Bragatyr » Fri Dec 12, '14, 4:57 am

I just love that Alis is so frightfully indignant here. That's pretty close to how I really imagine her; she wouldn't put up with any crap. I think this is prime evidence of how Alis would fare in a contest of wills between all the Phantasy Star champions!
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