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Reviews of Expectations

Postby Review Type S-2 » Thu Feb 21, '13, 7:53 pm

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Re: Reviews of Expectations

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Feb 26, '13, 6:03 am

Enjoyable story so far and I like that she can pretty well take care of herself and seems able to handle any situation. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes in the future. :)
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Re: Reviews of Expectations

Postby augmentedfourth » Wed Feb 27, '13, 8:35 pm

Glad you liked it, SS1! As we speak, she's currently driving a truckful of aspiring mercenaries in a high-speed chase involving some stolen data. Later on in the timeline, she surreptitiously took some pictures of one of her colleagues that would eventually be used against her. If I ever write a sequel to the book, she'll be in it. I'd suggest not messing with Agent Palmer. :wink:
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