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Reviews of Clarity

Postby Review Type S-2 » Thu Dec 27, '12, 7:08 pm

Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Clarity by augmentedfourth. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Clarity. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help augmentedfourth in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Clarity. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

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Re: Reviews of Clarity

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Dec 29, '12, 8:55 pm

Very interesting story. Captured my interest from the start and kept it all the way through. Terrific writing and descriptive detail. Enjoyed it very much. :clap:
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Re: Reviews of Clarity

Postby tilinelson2 » Sun Dec 30, '12, 2:06 am

It has been a while since I read a new Phantasy Star fanfiction (I am unable to write anything myself), and I am glad you did. Your writing is flawless, as always, and you always manage to bring an interesting story out of Phantasy Star lore.

I love when people give life to npcs or even pcs that had no development on the game, and your Damor story is very good in trying to explain the circumstances Alis & her companions meet him and his eccentric questions. You gave a new meaning to a forgetable npc, so thanks for sharing your views with us. Also, it is always nice to read something fresh about the first game, that is so overlooked.
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Re: Reviews of Clarity

Postby augmentedfourth » Mon Dec 31, '12, 4:38 am

Thanks for reading! I know a lot of the game's minor details were never meant to have much significance from the point of view of the designers, but it's fun to create stories based on them sometimes. And Damor was always the best part of that headache-inducing tower. ;)
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