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Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Feb 28, '12, 1:13 am

Hello,

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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Feb 28, '12, 1:27 am

Excellent!! :clap:

I like this format, and you have a wonderful way with words.

Offhand, I'd guess it may be talking about Mieu because of the crimson hair remarks, but I could be wrong.
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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby tilinelson2 » Wed Feb 29, '12, 1:38 am

Thanks for the kind words, SS1! If one person enjoyed it, it was worth writing :)

And sorry, no e-cookie for you SS1! The character used as an inspiration fits in many ways the scene and feelings portrayed in the poem.
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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Feb 3, '18, 6:36 pm

Bumping this up again. It is beautiful. Anyone else want to guess who the character might be?
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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Feb 11, '20, 8:39 pm

Bumping this up again.

Poetry for Valentine's Day is always appropriate. I felt the need to read this again. It is almost bittersweet in many ways. A joy to read.
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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Dec 29, '21, 4:35 pm

Bumping this up again.
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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sun Feb 13, '22, 6:39 pm

Reading this again for valentine's 2022! Sometimes love can hurt. It is not always happy times.
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Re: Reviews of Dream of a Rose

Postby myau56 » Fri Feb 18, '22, 6:11 pm

Oh no it's not always happy, alas....:(
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