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 Post subject: Reviews of Moving Forward
PostPosted: Thu Feb 16, '12, 12:04 am 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Moving Forward by augmentedfourth. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Moving Forward. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help augmentedfourth in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Moving Forward. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, '12, 12:22 am 
A good story for a reaction like "Awww... how sweet!" :D

Although I'm usually inclined to not-so-romantic stories, and you all know that very well, judging by my fanfics (luckily you don't read my non-PS fanfics because it would stain my reputation further :p), I can appreciate a well-written quickie love story.

The only issue I have with it, and it is not a real issue, just different points of view, is that I don't imagine Saya acting like that. In my mind, she is stronger, and more confident in Hahn's mission. But that Saya would not be good for a romantic story like that, so I can understand your Saya.


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, '12, 5:12 pm 
Just read it ! Very nice story, you really have a good style and your writing is very pleasant : me too I'm generally not to fond of romantic and so stories (depends on my mind) but It's cool to read : bravo !


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