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Reviews of The Extinct Ones

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Dec 13, '11, 3:12 am

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You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding The Extinct Ones by Lucas. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in The Extinct Ones. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Lucas in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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Re: Reviews of The Extinct Ones

Postby tilinelson2 » Thu Dec 15, '11, 12:15 am

Well, interesting story. Although I find it ironic that Alis is considered the "protector of dragons", for no one else killed so many dragons, it is a heart-rending tale of a rational species aware that their end is coming and they are powerless to prevent their extinction. You did a great job, Lucas.
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Re: Reviews of The Extinct Ones

Postby Lucas » Thu Dec 15, '11, 7:37 am

tilinelson2 wrote:I find it ironic that Alis is considered the "protector of dragons", for no one else killed so many dragons.


Love how you pointed that out :lol: . Game-wise she’s had the chance to kill the most dragons across all the planets.

Glad you enjoyed it mate.
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