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PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, '11, 1:56 pm 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Death of a Serpent by H-Man. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Death of a Serpent. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help H-Man in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Death of a Serpent. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Fringes of Algo Staff


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, '11, 2:50 am 
A really good story. Had my complete attention from the very moment I began reading it. Chills went up my spine reading how she dealt with her prisoners...cruel torture!! Wow, what a clever way for the hero to save the day, so to speak, lol, and end her rein. That was very unexpected and a very nice touch to the story. Great descriptive language and detail throughout the entire story. Very nicely written. Great ending also! :clap:


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, '11, 4:26 pm 
Thanks for reading! I figured that there's already very little PS1 literature out there, and much less of it set *before* the events of PS1, so I thought I'd try something different.


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