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Reviews of Death of a Serpent

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Oct 18, '11, 1:56 pm

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You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Death of a Serpent by H-Man. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Death of a Serpent. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help H-Man in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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Re: Reviews of Death of a Serpent

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Nov 23, '11, 2:50 am

A really good story. Had my complete attention from the very moment I began reading it. Chills went up my spine reading how she dealt with her prisoners...cruel torture!! Wow, what a clever way for the hero to save the day, so to speak, lol, and end her rein. That was very unexpected and a very nice touch to the story. Great descriptive language and detail throughout the entire story. Very nicely written. Great ending also! :clap:
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Re: Reviews of Death of a Serpent

Postby H-Man » Wed Nov 30, '11, 4:26 pm

Thanks for reading! I figured that there's already very little PS1 literature out there, and much less of it set *before* the events of PS1, so I thought I'd try something different.
*H-Man as Chaz, looks at Rika, aka Paula* Chaz-Man- "Hey, I've been wandering around Motavia for quite a while with you now. It says in that weird blue box up there that one more battle with a sandworm and we can level up to husband and wife!"

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