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Reviews of A Reason to Remain

Postby Review Type S-2 » Sat Nov 26, '11, 12:09 pm

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Re: Reviews of A Reason to Remain

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Mon Nov 28, '11, 7:22 pm

Intriguing story. The relationship between these two seems to be getting deeper in more ways than one. Good thing Anna was there for Rolf and helped him see things in a different way. We all could use someone like that at various times. Very powerful sentence and statement in these words... "The past tragedies should not be instruments of sorrow to drag him down and making him feel powerless to change the present and the future the same way he was powerless to change the past, but as lessons to be learned the hard way.".... I like that. :)
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Re: Reviews of A Reason to Remain

Postby tilinelson2 » Wed Nov 30, '11, 12:29 am

Thanks for reading and reviewing SS1! I'm glad that sometimes my writings provide something more than entertainment.
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Re: Reviews of A Reason to Remain

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Jan 10, '23, 11:58 pm

Great story to read again! Anna helping Rolf through a bad time. That's real friendship. Although it seems Rolf may have more feelings for Anna than friendship! Wonderfully written story.
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Re: Reviews of A Reason to Remain

Postby myau56 » Wed Jan 11, '23, 12:32 pm

Friendship at its best !! :fiery: :clap:
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