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PostPosted: Tue Nov 8, '11, 1:13 am 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Paradise Reobtained by tilinelson2. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Paradise Reobtained. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help tilinelson2 in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Paradise Reobtained. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Fringes of Algo Staff


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, '11, 9:13 pm 
Interesting story. Nicely written. It was a little hard to read I admit because of all the enormous suffering she had to endure. Nice ending though.


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, '11, 12:39 am 
Thanks for reading, SS1! I didn't want to make it hard to read (unlike the other dark stories I've written), but, well, it is the opinion of the reader that counts.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 9, '16, 10:21 pm 
Bumping this story review up again. Fascinating story that I enjoyed reading again just now. Yeah, maybe a little dark, but I like some dark stories every now and then. Life is not always about jokes and laughter. Excellent writing tilinelson2! :clap:


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