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 Post subject: Reviews of A True Layan
PostPosted: Sat Sep 3, '11, 6:53 pm 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding A True Layan by H-Man. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in A True Layan. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help H-Man in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of A True Layan. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Fringes of Algo Staff


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 4, '11, 2:44 am 
Ah, that's a terrific story, although a bit sad in the end. He didn't deserve that fate but you know what they saw about a woman scorned, or something like that. I find it quite believable that she wanted to, and did, try to settle the score with him regarding her sister. Sure makes you think about a bunch of bones in another light ... no telling who's bones they might be. Excellent story.


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 4, '11, 3:14 am 
Great story, it exploits something that is only present in Phantasy Star III, as far as I know: people do right or wrong things out of their will, not because they are possessed by Dark Force or following blindly their leader who is possessed. That makes the personal vendettta against Ryan very believable, while the other games didn't leave room for that. He killed a woman in a fit of rage and he met his destiny in a fit of rage (calculated, though).

Looks like Lune has become the Hitler of Phantasy Star fanfictions: the abominable leader responsible for all the atrocities committed in his times.

The last chapter is superb, raising a philosophic issue about memories long forgotten, which will probably be buried in the sands of time.


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