Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

by **Review Type S-2** » Sat Apr 16, '11, 2:27 pm

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by **Silver_Surfer1** » Sat Apr 16, '11, 5:03 pm

A very cute story. I read all 5 chapters at one time. I love short stories, lol. Very enjoyable story to read, and the characters of Tili and Maia were a nice surprise. Loved the romantic ending.