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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby tilinelson2 » Wed Mar 2, '11, 6:54 pm

You know I love them all :p
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby H-Man » Wed Mar 2, '11, 7:34 pm

Okay, read chapter 14. Huh...Anna is still divided against the healer and Telemental went technique happy. How will it all end? :)
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby tilinelson2 » Wed Mar 2, '11, 9:02 pm

It is up to you now, my task is finished :p

By the way, your story is quite good. I liked its ending, very original.
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby H-Man » Thu Mar 3, '11, 7:45 pm

Aaaaaaaaaand Done! Finished it today. I'll have to put in some real hours of work time to make up for the time I spent reading it (to be fair, all of my numerous tasks were in hands of other people, so I had nothing to do). I liked the ending and I enjoyed the redemption of the story's anti-hero. The whole bit about Rune calling the telemental "weirdo" was...er...kinda weird, but that's okay. Nice message at the end, although I found it strange that the healer said she had bad social skills. Oh well.
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby tilinelson2 » Thu Mar 3, '11, 8:09 pm

Thanks for the appreciation, H-man!

Well, if Rune called Chaz "shorty", why not the telemental "weirdo"? :p

More at PM, to not fill here with spoilers.
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby H-Man » Fri Mar 4, '11, 1:23 am

Gosh darn it, Tilinelson! Now you me falling in love with these girls, too. I was walking from the subway station to my school and, my mind drifting in the direction of the story, I felt the desire to be around those four and, Heaven help me, felt even kind of sad at the thought of them in the twilight of their lives. ;)
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby tilinelson2 » Fri Mar 4, '11, 10:28 am

Wow! Cool ! Really nice. Now you understand why I wrote such a huge fanfic. They just forced me to do so ;)
Maybe you'll be writing a fanfic of my fanfic :p
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby H-Man » Fri Mar 4, '11, 12:02 pm

tilinelson2 wrote:Wow! Cool ! Really nice. Now you understand why I wrote such a huge fanfic. They just forced me to do so ;)
Maybe you'll be writing a fanfic of my fanfic :p


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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby tilinelson2 » Fri Mar 4, '11, 12:16 pm

I suggested something weirder to Tanith: for her to write an anonymous fanfic of her own original work.
I think you should try it too when you finish yours :p
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Re: Reviews of The Mad Telemental

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Oct 8, '16, 8:34 pm

Another wonderful story by tilinelson2! Hope to read it again this month!
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