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Reviews of Compassion

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Nov 23, '10, 12:26 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Compassion by tilinelson2. You may use this topic to let tilinelson2 know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Re: Reviews of Compassion

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Thu Nov 25, '10, 6:43 pm

Interesting story. I must say Miss Shir seems like she could certainly use an attitude adjustment, and I think she just got it! :lol: :clap:
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Re: Reviews of Compassion

Postby H-Man » Fri Dec 3, '10, 9:33 am

Interesting story. Makes me wonder how Shir and Anna would react when they end up on the same team.
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Re: Reviews of Compassion

Postby tilinelson2 » Fri Dec 3, '10, 5:41 pm

My intention is to work a brief fanfic describing this moment, as a second chapter for this one. After all, I think I adopted Anna as my character :p
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Re: Reviews of Compassion

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Mar 1, '23, 5:35 pm

Great story!
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Re: Reviews of Compassion

Postby myau56 » Thu Mar 2, '23, 12:26 pm

This story is so nice : congratulations ! :clap:
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