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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, '10, 6:54 pm 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Preparations for Battle by H-Man. You may use this topic to let H-Man know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Preparations for Battle. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, '10, 3:55 am 
Interesting story. Looking forward to the next story. :)


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 8, '11, 1:37 am 
A nice piece to wrap up the untied things. This one links better the characters and link them better to their PSIV background. In the first ones, the PSIV connection seemed to be very light, almost superflous. Now things are better tied. Nice job.


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