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Reviews of Preparations for Battle
by Review Type S-2 » Wed Oct 13, '10, 6:54 pm
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Re: Reviews of Preparations for Battle
by Silver_Surfer1 » Sun Oct 17, '10, 3:55 am
Interesting story. Looking forward to the next story. 
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Re: Reviews of Preparations for Battle
by tilinelson2 » Tue Feb 8, '11, 1:37 am
A nice piece to wrap up the untied things. This one links better the characters and link them better to their PSIV background. In the first ones, the PSIV connection seemed to be very light, almost superflous. Now things are better tied. Nice job.
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