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Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Aug 17, '10, 6:16 pm

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of The Demon Rods by H-Man. You may use this topic to let H-Man know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Aug 17, '10, 7:41 pm

Intriguing story so far. Kaire has captured my attention. She had a super workout there and seems to be very capable. She also seems to have some unique feelings for Zi-Ou. Looking forward to seeing where this story leads. :)
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Wed Aug 18, '10, 12:07 am

Strong start so far H-Man. Looking forward to see where this leads.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Wed Aug 18, '10, 9:04 pm

What an excellent second chapter, or erm, part. I'm pretty curious as to who will cross paths with Kaire in her quest.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Thu Aug 19, '10, 6:27 am

Very interesting second chapter. Looking forward to seeing what else is ahead.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Thu Aug 19, '10, 8:36 pm

Epic third chapter. Looking forward to the next. ^-^
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Sat Aug 21, '10, 9:04 pm

NIce. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see the Troublesome three fight Kaire. =D
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Fri Aug 27, '10, 10:30 pm

What an excellent birthday present H-Man. Gotta say though, the ending of that chapter wasvery very sad, poor Saya. -_-

Makes me curious as to what will happen next.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Thu Sep 2, '10, 8:17 am

Aw isn't that human of Zi-Ou, he says he loves her. Tell you one thing, that is a very interesting shipping and they actually would make a cute couple. x3.

Nicely done H-Man.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby Atlinsmere » Mon Sep 6, '10, 10:26 pm

What an interesting way to end the story H-Man. Gotta hand it to you, despite it being slow it was still interesting enough and leaves off for your next story. Honestly, these stories reminds me of a books series I have yet to finish. It had 6 books, the first five books had absolutely nothign to do with one another, however the sixth book brought each character together to take on on of the characters from the previous book.

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