by H-Man » Thu Jul 15, '10, 4:52 pm
Thanks for the reviews, Tanith and Silver Surfer. This story is actually the sequel to the other one, which explains (for better or worse) how the characters got where they were. Laya and Sari see more action in that one. Between the impending weddings, the declining sanity of the townspeople, and the appearance of Corg's wife, who really hadn't the foggiest what was going on, it was important for those two to stay behind.
I don't think the first story is as well-written as this one, but it's important for the foundation of the story arc (should you want to call it that).
EDIT: Went back and put all the parallel dialogue in italics, to separate those conversation from the main narrative.
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H-Man on Thu Jul 15, '10, 4:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
*H-Man as Chaz, looks at Rika, aka Paula* Chaz-Man- "Hey, I've been wandering around Motavia for quite a while with you now. It says in that weird blue box up there that one more battle with a sandworm and we can level up to husband and wife!"
Fringes Official Monocled Gentleman.
MADE A NEW FATE Achievement.