by H-Man » Mon Jul 12, '10, 1:35 am
Well, I guess I should explain an element of the story before you read (or review) it, so that it makes a little more sense. If if it isn't very apparent, the story is something of a Mary Sue in the characterizations of the three main male characters, being based off of yours truly and two of his friends. As a result, the dialogue and expressions used by them are a bit specific and unique. It's said that dialogue should be realistic and the way people actually talk. Thus, I drew inspiration from my interactions with my friends. As a result, the dialogue is something of a two-edged sword: it is believable (yes, we do talk like that) but it comes across as something of an inside joke. Okay, just had to explain. Please read and enjoy.
*H-Man as Chaz, looks at Rika, aka Paula* Chaz-Man- "Hey, I've been wandering around Motavia for quite a while with you now. It says in that weird blue box up there that one more battle with a sandworm and we can level up to husband and wife!"
Fringes Official Monocled Gentleman.
MADE A NEW FATE Achievement.