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My fanfic

Postby Celeith » Tue Aug 14, '07, 6:20 am

I thought I'd take a shot at a PSIII fanfic i've had on my mind for weeks now. Its up there with Tsunami's and Thouls so I hope everyone enjoys what i put..
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Postby Tsunami » Tue Aug 14, '07, 9:01 pm

It was pretty good, possibly one of the better PSIII fanfics that I've read. I caught a typo here and there, and some grammar that could be touched up, but otherwise it's fine. :) The only thing that really bugs me is that you spelled Gwyn's name as Gwen. Not sure if that was intentional or not.

In my opinion, this sounds like a very good start (and interesting idea) for a possible sequal. Though for some reason I was expecting Mieu and Wren to go with Adan in the end.
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Postby Celeith » Tue Aug 14, '07, 10:39 pm

I'm glad you liked it Tsunami, i've read your fanfics before and i liked em and they were terrific so I'm honored that you enjoyed mine.
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Postby The $ Avenger » Mon Aug 20, '07, 1:10 am

I haven't got around to reading here lately. In fact, I don't think I ever got to Tsunami's newest one. So many things to catch up on!
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