Hello,
You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding The New Dawn by Kaloes. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in The New Dawn. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Kaloes in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.
Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of The New Dawn. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.
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