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Reviews of The New Dawn

Postby Review Type S-2 » Sun Jun 26, '11, 11:29 pm

Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding The New Dawn by Kaloes. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in The New Dawn. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Kaloes in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of The New Dawn. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

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Re: Reviews of The New Dawn

Postby snowdragon » Tue Jun 28, '11, 5:07 pm

Captured my interest and wondering now what happens next.

This line is a keeper "What will be your poison missy?".
A Knight is sworn to valor,
his heart knows only virtue,
his blade defends the helpless,
his might upholds the weak,
his word speaks only truth,
his wrath undoes the wicked

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Re: Reviews of The New Dawn

Postby Celeith » Wed Jun 29, '11, 4:55 pm

Thanks, its good to know someone's reading this
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Re: Reviews of The New Dawn

Postby Lucas » Thu Jun 30, '11, 6:05 am

Sorry Kaloes I was actually meaning to let you know what I thought of your story earlier. I quite like Celeith and I’m glad you decided to write about her. I'm also very impressed that you put her into the Phantasy Star III storyline.

I'm eager to find out more about her and development with the other characters she meets too. Keep it up mate.
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Re: Reviews of The New Dawn

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Feb 24, '18, 7:15 pm

A very interesting story and well worth another read! :clap:
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