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PostPosted: Tue Dec 24, '13, 9:46 pm 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding A Peculiar Christmas by tilinelson2. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in A Peculiar Christmas. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help tilinelson2 in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of A Peculiar Christmas. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Fringes of Algo Staff


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 26, '13, 12:07 am 
Absolutely beautiful story tilinelson2! Thank you for sharing it with us on this Christmas Day. What better gift than to give and share the spirit of Christmas with someone else. Excellent!! :clap:


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 26, '13, 10:16 pm 
Thank you very much, tilinelson for sharing that story! Not only does it capture the spirit of Christmas, but it captures the attitude of Christianity itself. What a creative way to connect the life of Earth to Algol and it also serves as a foreshadowing tool since the Earthmen makes a cameo later in the PS II story.

Grammatically, you've already addressed that you'd edit later, so there's not much more to say.


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 8, '14, 1:14 am 
Thanks for the kind words, people. I haven't had the time to proofread it yet, but I am glad that idea of mine it was an enjoyable read.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 25, '14, 6:00 am 
Christmas day 2014 and a good time to re-read this story again. Excellent work!! :)


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 9, '15, 1:34 am 
Christmas 2015 is drawing near and always a good time to reread this excellent story by tilinelson2!


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 1, '17, 9:08 pm 
Reading this story again for the 2017 Christmas season! Wonderful! :clap:


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 3, '17, 6:32 pm 
I had never read this story but now it's done ! Nice story, tilinelson2 ! :clap:


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