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PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, '07, 7:44 am 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Wild Wacky Adventures of Phantasy Star, the fan fiction by SparkyIII. You may use this topic to let SparkyIII know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Wild Wacky Adventures of Phantasy Star. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, '08, 11:18 am 
This was an interesting read. Somewhat random with all the Phantasy Star characters popping up, but it wasn't bad. However, I would've liked to have seen some dialogue between characters for more interaction, though you handled it very well with the descriptions alone. :D


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