Aww, tili, you're turning soft on us. A story with a happy ending and no torture along the way?
All joking aside, this was a very sweet story. Even in just a few short pages, you captured the emotional significance of the moment and offered a nice look into the feelings of both Rhys and Maia. What I really like is how you seemed to enhance that even with all the stress and planning and over-the-top details that can go into weddings
(believe me, I know), what's really significant is the love between the happy couple. The wedding is just one day. Everything that comes next is more important!