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Reviews of Veronica

Postby Review Type S-2 » Fri Aug 20, '10, 5:28 pm

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This topic is for reviews of Veronica by Aeroprism. You may use this topic to let Aeroprism know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Re: Reviews of Veronica

Postby Tanith » Fri Aug 20, '10, 5:43 pm

Okay, so that made me cry. Hard. You were able to get me to feel real dread for the narrator. I knew something was really wrong, but since I wasn't sure what, I was compelled to keep reading even though I knew it wouldn't end well. And what a gut-wrenching ending. Wow. That's powerful, Aero. Well done.
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Re: Reviews of Veronica

Postby Atlinsmere » Fri Aug 20, '10, 10:25 pm

While I didn't cry, I did see the emotion. I saw something tragic was going to happen early on, I just didn't know what until I got closer to the end. Then when I thought I figured things out, it was much more different than I assumed it to be.

Nicely done, my eyes almost watered. -_-
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Re: Reviews of Veronica

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Mon Aug 23, '10, 5:04 am

I knew something was up. A guy just simply does not forget his wife is gone on a trip and then calls the police. Very compelling story as you know something dramtic is going to happen, you just don't know what it is. Interesting. Sad ending, and not totally unexpected, but still the mystery keeps you reading onward. Great story.
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Re: Reviews of Veronica

Postby tilinelson2 » Mon Oct 11, '10, 8:53 pm

The story is very good. After the second day, I really thought something serious has happened to Veronica and the guy didn't remember, but the story is very well written and the emotions are very real.
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Re: Reviews of Veronica

Postby jessie » Tue Mar 6, '12, 1:31 am

Wow! Really had an emotional impact. The point of view draws you into the character and as I read i was trying to understand what was happening and then...wow!
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