Well it's definitely a good way of creating some interest among those not involved in EOTA.

And besides, it's good to see something about the EOTA world that doesn't involve our lot, which is also a plus. And given how you're a really good writer, in my opinion, you really ought to try and put more of this stuff out there. A little something to keep it fresh for those unfamiliar with the world.
And that's it really. I'm not much good at reviewing fiction except to say whether it's good or not.

But as I said, do more of this.