Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

by **Review Type S-2** » Wed Mar 9, '11, 11:30 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of My Green-Haired Savior (Golvellius Fan Fic) by H-Man. You may use this topic to let H-Man know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Thoul

by **tilinelson2** » Wed Mar 9, '11, 12:06 pm

Wow! It is almost as good as Twilight! You just need some 1,500 pages of teenage emo babbling

The story is quite short and good. I'm enjoying very much the way you are revisiting all those SMS forgotten classics and writing creative stories about them.

by **Silver_Surfer1** » Wed Mar 9, '11, 10:03 pm

Good story. Could use a little more proofreading for a few errors, but otherwise very nicely written. Captured and held my interest. Good ending also, almost reminding me of the thought better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all..

by **carlsojos** » Thu Mar 10, '11, 12:32 am

Enjoyable story. I like them a touch longer, but that was a nice glimpse at a game I've never seen. It's interesting seeing a realm that I otherwise would never know existed. Thank ya for the story.

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