Reviews of The New Dawn

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You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding The New Dawn by Kaloes. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in The New Dawn. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Kaloes in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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Fringes of Algo Staff

Captured my interest and wondering now what happens next.

This line is a keeper "What will be your poison missy?".

Thanks, its good to know someone's reading this

Sorry Kaloes I was actually meaning to let you know what I thought of your story earlier. I quite like Celeith and I’m glad you decided to write about her. I'm also very impressed that you put her into the Phantasy Star III storyline.

I'm eager to find out more about her and development with the other characters she meets too. Keep it up mate.

A very interesting story and well worth another read!