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PostPosted: Mon Feb 4, '08, 5:56 am 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of The Magnificent Seven Return, the fan fiction by Snorb. You may use this topic to let Snorb know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of The Magnificent Seven Return. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 5, '08, 1:58 am 
I'm guessing there's still some trace of Dark Force still around. The game never explained how the wildlife on Dezoris became corrupted after all.


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 5, '08, 6:21 am 
This is an excellent start to the story. I look forward to finding out just who the villain will be and what everyone else has been doing during the seven years.


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 12, '08, 10:29 pm 
Shir as an agent?! I wonder how long this'll last? Rolf will certainly have his hands full just keeping an eye on her.


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, '08, 6:34 pm 
I don't think I've read this before. It seems like A good beginning to a story. It sounds like those two should be very happy at this time in their lives, and together, however he seems to feel a sense of worry or doom ahead. It will be interesting to see how this one goes and what foes they may face together and apart.


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, '11, 4:51 am 
It is an intriguing start for a new story. Shir as an agent? I wonder for how long she will be able to keep herself from stealing. The nightmares are intriguing and Shir is a very lovely companion for Rolf.

I hope someday we can see a follow-up for that.


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