Reviews of Should I Exist

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Reviews of Should I Exist

Postby Review Type S-2 » Fri Oct 26, '07, 1:16 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Should I Exist, the fan fiction by Kaloes. You may use this topic to let Kaloes know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Should I Exist. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

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Re: Reviews of Should I Exist

Postby tilinelson2 » Fri Jul 29, '11, 4:03 pm

Quite intriguing story. The warrior Kara blaming the princess Kara for existing when she should not, takes us back to Rhys' original decision. Was it just something of her mind or something real? Why did she need so bad the assurance that she existed?

The story opens many possibilities, and that is why it is interesting. Nice work.
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