Reviews of The Extinct Ones

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Fringes of Algo Staff

Well, interesting story. Although I find it ironic that Alis is considered the "protector of dragons", for no one else killed so many dragons, it is a heart-rending tale of a rational species aware that their end is coming and they are powerless to prevent their extinction. You did a great job, Lucas.

tilinelson2 wrote:

I find it ironic that Alis is considered the "protector of dragons", for no one else killed so many dragons.

Love how you pointed that out . Game-wise she’s had the chance to kill the most dragons across all the planets.

Glad you enjoyed it mate.