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Reviews of The Alisian Gods

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Jul 27, '10, 6:45 pm

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This topic is for reviews of The Alisian Gods by H-Man. You may use this topic to let H-Man know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Re: Reviews of The Alisian Gods

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Aug 11, '10, 5:49 am

I enjoyed reading this story and seeing the continuing story of these characters. It was very easy to become very fond of them all and their friendship. I think my favorite part in this one was the zombie fight. The ending was very good, a little bittersweet in some respects, but that only made it that much better. Excellent story.
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Re: Reviews of The Alisian Gods

Postby tilinelson2 » Fri Feb 4, '11, 11:50 am

I thought I've already reviewed it, but I noticed that it has no reviews on ff.net, so I'll leave mine here.

This one is a cross-crossover. Altered Beast world is really a great setting for some epic fights. It was curious to see that Corg has become an Altered Beast himself. This story is also a bit different from the others of the series because you put a message across it.

The fact that Mieu is a cyborg, and not an android as she was designed to be in PSIII (yeah, blame the poor translation for calling her a cyborg) explains a lot about her nature. It becomes somewhat awkward that the others can't see her humanity, but it must be because they are confused about the cyborg/android thing :p
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Re: Reviews of The Alisian Gods

Postby H-Man » Tue Feb 8, '11, 12:50 am

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of pleasure in writing this story and developing the characters, mainly those other than Corg. Despite Corg being based on you-know-who, I like writing about Mieu and Sari and Corg's friends more. I think more movies need plots that involve beautiful cyborg (or android, take your pick) taking on giant rhinoceros men in order to save the soul of the person they love. That's just great literature there. ;-)
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