Reviews of The Demon Rods

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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby tilinelson2 » Mon Feb 7, '11, 5:33 pm

Very violent story, with lots of action. It is very good, the way it blends with The Blacksmith's Son. This one has more of PSIV, though only the characters, not their behavior, that is almost all original by you. Great job.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby H-Man » Tue Feb 8, '11, 12:53 am

I didn't intend for this one to be as long as it ended up being. It just kept on getting longer and longer as I wrote it. I liked switching Kyra's (or Kaire's) weapon to the emei piercers, as I didn't want to repeat the Dragon Missiles with her. Glad you liked it. The next two stories here will bring everything full circle.
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Re: Reviews of The Demon Rods

Postby tilinelson2 » Tue Feb 8, '11, 1:07 am

Yeah, I had just noticed there are two more to go, that are not present on ff.net. Well, let´s read them. CoG can wait a little longer :p
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