Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

by **Review Type S-2** » Fri Aug 6, '10, 1:19 pm

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of The Blacksmith's Son by H-Man. You may use this topic to let H-Man know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of The Blacksmith's Son. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul

by **Atlinsmere** » Fri Aug 6, '10, 6:36 pm

First off, Hahn was a *. Second thing I 'd like to say. This story was such a tragic. For some reason I thought Romeo and Juliet, except of course not everybody dies. I am curious as to what Hahn will bring to the table in future stories. Well, can't wait for the next one H-Man, keep up the great work.

by **Silver_Surfer1** » Wed Aug 11, '10, 6:31 am

Interesting story and interesting characters. Another great job, H-Man.

by **Lyla2284** » Fri Sep 3, '10, 9:01 am

Well, you waited long enough for a review from me, H-Man. First of all, your descriptive writing skills are excellent. Whenever I read one of your fanfics, I actually feel like I'm witnessing these events in 17th Century China. Beautiful work. This story made me smile, alot. Han going against his father is what we might expect, but Saya, a flower nymph? Now that was something unexpected. It starts off well, then starts to deepen in mystery the further you read. Bear in mind that I'm reading this fic as I'm writing this review...

The ending is tragic, but still leaves room for a sequel.

All in all, a beautiful fan-fiction, H-Man. :up:

Now, bring us more Li Si and Ru-Ne!

by **Xander** » Fri Sep 17, '10, 2:58 pm

I say nein! More Cha-zi and Ri-Ge!

Anyway, excellent work H-Man. You put a nice twist on things making Saya into what she was in the story. Your ability to describe the situations in detail are fantastic as always and the ending,t hough tragic, shows where the story is expected to be going next. So keep it up. We needs moar!

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