Reviews of Sunrise

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Reviews of Sunrise

Postby Review Type S-2 » Sun Jan 30, '11, 11:01 pm

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Sunrise by augmentedfourth. You may use this topic to let augmentedfourth know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Sunrise. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

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Re: Reviews of Sunrise

Postby H-Man » Sun Mar 6, '11, 12:53 am

Wow, the story starts out very heartwarming with the long-loved trope of the free spirit and the logical type falling in love (I'm reminded of someone saying, "When others look at a person and ask, 'What do you see in him?', you know you're dealing with love."). And then, you go from heartwarming to heartrending. Nonetheless, a very beautiful story.
*H-Man as Chaz, looks at Rika, aka Paula* Chaz-Man- "Hey, I've been wandering around Motavia for quite a while with you now. It says in that weird blue box up there that one more battle with a sandworm and we can level up to husband and wife!"

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