H-Man, it was a pleasure to read your latest story on Corg and his friends, etc. I truly hope you will revisit these characters one day as there could be so much potential story material there.
I always look forward to reading about these particular characters and what adventures you have thrust them into next. I was very upset there for a moment when
it seemed like Corg might be dead! It was very clever how you handled that.
In some ways I sort of got the feeling that this story seemed to be a little laid back or quieter than your other stories involving these characters. There didn't seem to be as much excitement or heat of battle taking place. There was more talking about it than actually doing it, if you know what I mean. It would have been nice to have these friends spend a little more time with each other also and enjoy each other's company, so to speak.
Also, I did notice some parts of the story could use a little more proofreading in certain areas. And, one thing that bothered me a bit is that
at first it took me a while to figure out which one of Corg's wives was speaking in this story since no names were mentioned in the beginning. I thought the EOTA references, etc., were quite clever and enjoyable. Great idea there.
All in all, another very enjoyable story! Keep up the good writing work!