Reviews of Rewriting Fate

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Fringes of Algo Staff

Well, I enjoyed reading the story very much. I say forget about Chaz and get back to Rune and Alys and romance, lol....just kidding about forgetting Chaz (I think ) . It will be interesting to see where you might take future stories/chapters with this and beyond and what other characters we might see.

Silver_Surfer1 wrote:

Well, I enjoyed reading the story very much. I say forget about Chaz and get back to Rune and Alys and romance, lol....just kidding about forgetting Chaz (I think ) . It will be interesting to see where you might take future stories/chapters with this and beyond and what other characters we might see.

Thanks a lot for reviewing! LOL, if I'd forget about Chaz, then it'd doom the whole universe (I think xD). Well, I plan to make the story follow the original's, only that I focus on Rune/Alys, so I think there'll be more chapters to this. And once I'm done with this story, I'll try and find a way to revive Nei in PSII, because there aren't enough happy stories about her. I'll try and upload the next chapter as soon as possible.

Cheers,
The Reviver

This was a good story to read again. Wish there was more of it.

Silver_Surfer1 wrote:

This was a good story to read again. Wish there was more of it.

Maybe another story based on this (fantastic) one ? Or maybe the following content ?