Reviews of Esmeray Story: The Vanishing Act

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Esmeray Story: The Vanishing Act by Tanith. You may use this topic to let Tanith know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Esmeray Story: The Vanishing Act. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul